Empathy

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It is much more interesting to actually recreate an incident for readers than to simply tell about it.I was always at her house when I was younger. Saturday nights were always our late nights preparing for her Sunday school class. Cutting out activities, gathering up lesson plans, and handouts. After we were fully prepared for the next morning, my cousin and I would go around the house searching for matching outfits to wear - was not very descriptive here. - After reading the bullets attached to the Empathy Narrative i realized that i have a lot of bad habits in my writings. Not enough details. I feel as if it is difficult for me to add details into certain forms of writing. When i write poetry on my own time i naturally have a lot of detail. But when i try to write a certain way it doesn't work. Hopefully that can change by the end of this course so i can be ready for college.

relates events in sequence. The creation of specific scenes set at actual times and in actual places