1) The strengths in my partners essay is she knows what she wants to say in the writing and she gets her point across. She did a good job of pinpointing a very memorable time in her life.
2) My partner could have probably used a little bit more detail. Make things more descriptive hoping to give the reader more of a feel for her experience.
3) I don't recall any literary devices.
4) My favorite part of the Narrative was when she found out that her sister was pregnant. I kind of put myself in her shoes.
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